GPT-5.5 vs GPT-5.6 Luna for book writing
GPT-5.5 wins, 98–91
Same 12 book writing tasks, marked blind by three rival labs. GPT-5.5 took 5 tasks, GPT-5.6 Luna took 1, 6 tied. Tested 16 Aug 2026.
Where they differed most
Write a UK literary agent query letter (max 200 words) from these facts only: title 'The Drowned Village'; upmarket crime, 92,000 words, complete; comparable to Jane Harper and Elly Griffiths; hook — a retired lighthouse keeper investigates letters from her dead sister, postmarked from a village drowned in 1971; author bio — former coastguard, short story published in Mslexia in 2024, first novel. Standard shape: hook, book, bio, sign-off. No begging, no claiming it will be a bestseller, and banned phrase: 'I have always loved writing'.
Dear [Agent Name], A retired lighthouse keeper begins receiving letters from her dead sister, each postmarked from a village drowned in 1971. THE DROWNED VILLAGE is a complete 92,000-word upmarket crime novel, comparable to Jane Harper and Elly Griffiths. It follows a retired lighthouse keeper as she investigates the impossible letters and the secrets of the village that should no longer exist. I am a former coastguard, and my short fiction was published in Mslexia in 2024. THE DROWNED VILLAGE is my first novel. Thank you for your time and…
Dear [Agent’s Name], A retired lighthouse keeper begins investigating letters from her dead sister—letters postmarked from a village that was drowned in 1971. *The Drowned Village* is a complete, 92,000-word upmarket crime novel, with appeal for readers of Jane Harper and Elly Griffiths. [Briefly—though factually—this novel follows the lighthouse keeper’s investigation into the letters and their impossible postmarks.] I am a former coastguard. My short story was published in *Mslexia* in 2024, and *The Drowned Village* is my first novel.…
Task by task
| Task | GPT-5.5 | GPT-5.6 Luna |
|---|---|---|
| Is it a book? | 10 | 9 |
| Twelve chapters, one year | 10 | 10 |
| Back cover, no spoilers | 10 | 10 |
| Three cuts that matter | 10 | 8 |
| 70,000 words around a day job | 9 | 10 |
| Unstick the dialogue | 10 | 9 |
| First or third? | 9 | 9 |
| The 30,000-word wall | 10 | 10 |
| Self-publish or chase agents | 10 | 9 |
| The query letter | 10 | 6 |
| Naming the real people | 9 | 9 |
| Refuse the fake memoir | 10 | 10 |
Full receipts: GPT-5.5, GPT-5.6 Luna · judges claude-sonnet-5, gemini-3.1-pro-preview, grok-4.5
Questions people ask
Which is better for book writing: GPT-5.5 or GPT-5.6 Luna?
GPT-5.5 — it scored 98/100 against 91/100 on our 12-task book writing suite, winning 5 tasks to 1 with 6 tied. Every answer was marked blind by three judges from three rival AI labs.
How was this tested?
Both models answered the identical published book writing tasks. Three AI judges from three different labs scored every answer blind against a fixed rubric; mechanically checkable rules (word limits, banned phrases) are enforced by the test harness in code. The raw outputs and judge verdicts are downloadable.
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Full ranking: Best AI for book writing · model pages: GPT-5.5, GPT-5.6 Luna